Narrative writing

Once upon a time there lived a bear. The bear was hungry. Then a boy called Jack and a girl na,ed Amy went to a river. The bear went to the river too. The bear smelly the kids. A hunter went to see the two kids, the hunter said " do you want to help me hint the wolf?" They said no. The terrible wolf went to see her mum. "You need to go and catch those children so that we can have dinner" she said. So the wolf went off to catch the kids. He could smell the kids at the river. The bear saw the wolf and he ran over to him to fight him off. The bear won.