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Thursday, 17 March 2016

Cookie Writing

Like the moon, my chocolate chippie biscuit is circular. I can see an apple and an orange. It feels bumpy like concrete. It smells sweet like goodies. 

3 comments:

  1. hi madison pauline here your writihng is cool a you in room 24 you a so
    so so so so so so cool.

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  2. hi madison pauline here your writihng is cool a you in room 24 you a so
    so so so so so so cool.

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  3. I liked how you wrote 3 amazing sentences with capital letters and full stops. Next time could you write more in your second sentence. Wouldn't you want to say it smelled like chocolate.

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