I am a Year 5 learner in Room 10 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Miss West.
hi madison pauline here your writihng is cool a you in room 24 you a soso so so so so so cool.
I liked how you wrote 3 amazing sentences with capital letters and full stops. Next time could you write more in your second sentence. Wouldn't you want to say it smelled like chocolate.