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Thursday, 13 February 2020

Write like Pau

Walking all the way to my dad's lab, I'd cross the road over the bridge and take the bus to the lab.
When I arrived at the lab my dad now that I will arrive at 7:31 he told me to come fast then I saw
a big MACHINE!! Called a time machine I ran to look over . It was shiny with the chair in the middle.
Dad told me to stay behind the red line but I didn't.


I looked behind and in front of the machine I asked dad if I could go in . but he said ‘’ no son it's too
dangerous’’ I had the grumpiest face ever. Then when he wasn't looking I ran in the Machine and turned
it on and went to a Different I'm world..


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When he saw a different world he started to cry. Then I heard some more crying. I looked behind me and
saw my dad's WORKERS!!! I ran over to see them. I asked them what happened. They said that my dad
was testing if the time machine works.but they end up staying in the middle of nowhere  . I was so MAD
that I pushed a rock and it broke. They told me that if we get a chip that was so powerful. And if we can
get it. We can go back home . So we started my journey to the monten it took. days and nights days and n
ight. When we arrived I grabbed the chip and it teleported home. I gave my dad a beating. 


The end





1 comment:

  1. Hi Maddie-I love your story. I will read it to Evie coz I know she will laugh out loud! Keep-up the writing.
    Mrs Burt

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