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Tuesday 6 August 2019

Dangerous writing challenge

once upon a time we went to the zoo and we wanted to see the anemils we went to see the elefint and a cat on a rock the cat was stuck on the rock the elefent was sleeping the elefins head was on the egde and the cat was so scerd the elefint was going to scosh the cat everyone was scerd the the cat was going to die or get scosh every one was so so scerd no noe coud brethe everyone wanted to sve the cat but the rock was to far we wanted to help but we cant case the elefin was on the eged.

we were doing a Challenge .that the teacher has to put a pitcher on the TV and we have to write about it but we are getting timed. 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Maddy it is Gabby. That was such a touching story .I was scared when you said that the cat was going to die hope you do a other story like this .

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  2. Hi Maddy My name is Mata and I am a year 7,I liked how you told us what the challenge was about,also how you were talking about a zoo.

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