Once upon a time there was a family that thought that thay could go out. But thay did,nt now were to go. than thay wanted to go to the zoo.The Dad said "ill go get the tickets".
So thay went off to the zoo thay heard the baby laughing in the back. Thay arrived first thay went the the lions then thay heard people talking about the new bird cage the baby wanted to go. So we went. we seen people playing with the birds. we toke the baby out of the pram. Then out of no were came a bird ready to land on the baby. It land but it didn't hurt the baby. But the baby was not the happy on her face.
This is my Dangerous Writing Challenge we did it for 5 min.
madison good job for rememberring your full stops and ABC if you need help just ask
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